Okay, I must admit that I actually bought the book only because of Kit Fisto (and the description of his eyes and his two hearts 😍) The way he talks and his realistically detached view of the universe: you just gotta love the guy. Concerning Kit Fisto there are a few mistakes: Nautolans don't have eyebrows (they don't have head hair or eyelashes), so it's nonsense to write repeatedly that Kit "raised his eyebrows". Another logical error: when Kit teaches the clones, he refers to the human body in his anatomical explanations. Kit is a nautolan, and the mere fact that he has two hearts and that his eyes work like amphibians' suggests that his anatomy is fundamentally different from that of humans. On the one hand I loved the description of Kit in this book: very coherent and sympathetic for me. He’s not that chatty rather serious, and his special smile is explained. On the other hand I wonder why these mistakes I’ve mentioned above, happened: if you decide to write about Kit (and Steven Barnes did it very well actually) you must not forget that you’re writing about a Nautolan and you have to be able writing out of his perspective, out of his body. As for the writing style: many phrases are repeated very often, without variation. The Jedi killer droid arc starts very promisingly and then fizzles out. As well developed as some characters are (Kit, Jangotat), others are extremely flat and uninteresting. They are talking in the same style so you can’t separate them. Some don't even have proper names, but anagrammatic designations that are neither funny nor intelligent. The story suffers from this. Anyway, I love the book because of Kit.